Monday, May 10, 2010

ENG201 solution

Based:- Mary Jane will be mentally retarded for life.
Better / Improved: Mary Jane will have an intellectual impairment for life

Based:- Mrs. Ali, that old biddy, sometimes requires too much of her employees.
Better / Improved: Mrs. Ali sometimes requires too much of her employees

Based:-. Please remind everyone to bring his notepad and pen or laptop to the meeting.
Better / Improved: Please remind everyone to bring his or her notepad and pen or laptop to the meeting

Based:- The committee chairman led the meeting.
Better / Improved: The committee chairperson led the meeting

Based:- She is a heart attack victim.
Better / Improved:

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